I love how you didn't just do the names you actually showed us the food i think you can work on more detail like choc chip cookie or pepperoni pizza and chocolate Donuts so we know what type it is and things like that
GREAT JOB!!!! Lily I love what you wrote and I also like how you put emojis at the end! Maybe next time you could write why you would like to have those things. Good job!
nice Lilly i like most of the food next time don't use alcole
ReplyDeleteI love how you didn't just do the names you actually showed us the food i think you can work on more detail like choc chip cookie or pepperoni pizza and chocolate Donuts so we know what type it is and things like that
ReplyDeleteawesome work lilly i love all your pictures you could put the date
ReplyDeleteGREAT JOB!!!! Lily I love what you wrote and I also like how you put emojis at the end! Maybe next time you could write why you would like to have those things. Good job!
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